Manifesto

Hey everyone- this manifesto is proving harder to do than I thought! I keep trying to write something more in-depth, but it’s not working because I keep getting the manifesto confused with a project description. SO, I have written an extremely short piece that I need you to give me feedback on PLEASE!! Help!! What does it need?

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“We aim to create a moment of suspended surprise and curiosity for our visitors.
By using the mediums of video, sound, and narrative story, we have created a space for play and experimentation.

Explore our library cache of visual and audio clips by keyword and fill them into the blanks of the story on the front page. Then, press play and watch and listen to your unique spin on the tale.”

 

Estella

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  1. #1 by hispiwrit on April 12, 2011 - 1:46 pm

    erhaps say that the the purpose of it is to divert from the morbidness of todays society and develop some sort of site where people can experience ‘fun’ together, somewhere to let your emotions run wild and somewhere for you to feel relaxed and express yourself in contrrast to many sites today its inviting you to enjoy yourself for free, without any catches, any extra expences, its just here to express yourself, your personality and be who you want to be 🙂

    Amy

  2. #2 by hispiwrit on April 12, 2011 - 1:46 pm

    I agree. We don’t want to lose those elements of ‘happiness’ which we were all so enthusiastic about at the beginning.

    Charlene

  3. #3 by hispiwrit on April 12, 2011 - 1:46 pm

    ‘sounds great Estella, i didn’t know we had agreed to audio files as well as it was gonna be difficult for sam ( i was a bit fuzzy as I have come done with some virus .) I’m so pleased we are thats sounds brill , I’m collecting stuff already in video and also agree that we need happiness or high spirits in our intro x

    Jane

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